You are already doing great! If you have a few extra minutes, don't hesitate to personalize your fundraiser :)
I work for thisNGO and have come across the brilliant work that's done.
Im particularly creating this campaign to cater to women of the age group from 18-25, who end up getting married at an early age.
Contributing to this will definitely help more women take up jobs, and cover the employment gap that exists currenly.
Potential donors will become campaign ambassadors of this movement.